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Hazel??? Feedback
Hi everyone,
I keep going back and forth on this next chapter... All text © NôvelD(r)a'ma.Org.
How do we feel about Hazel's tongue regenerating? The majority of my Beta readers were on the edge of their seats, begging me to fix her tongue. I originally planted Medusa's blood in Alpha Balthazar's book to give me a way to regenerate Hazel's tongue. By the end of the Lycan series, I'm going to need a powerful mage, and Hazel is a child of Hecate.
I also received a few comments from people who thought Hazel should remain special or different and keep her disability. They liked that I had a mute who used sign language.
I was half tempted to leave it as it is... because she can talk through the mind link. But as I started to write this next chapter, I felt uncertain.
What are your thoughts? Should we grow her tongue back? I know a few people will be disappointed, but I know a large majority will be happy.
Needless to say... I didn't finish tonight's chapter, because I couldn't decide if the "phone call" will be Facetime for sign language or an actual voice call.
Talk to me...